Friday, October 2, 2009

HW: Blog Comment #3

To Egypt C a.k.a E!Boogies #15 Spot

Egypt i love your headline "I AM TRAPPED!" it shows me that you understand our typical world, that we are not quite free. Your paragraph make a lot of sense which also show me you are a strong writer. You just stick all your major points into one piece and explain it well with great examples.

I totally agree with you that we are not free because there are some rules we still have to respect. Like what you said... if we're free why do we have to go to school and do homework. Why can't we just get drafted to the basketball league and play against Kobe Bryant or Lebron James? Following the laws doesnt lead to freedom which of course doesnt lead to happiness either.

Good job Egypt. But next time try to make your blog longer. You know how much i love reading your blog. Thanks for sharing. Good development.

-Quinn W a.k.a a.z.n quinny woooo #3

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