H.W # 4 Comments

To Bao Lin Z,

Hey Bao Lin, awesome paper you have written. You are such a great writer. You paper is so strong and deep. It is truely understanable and enjoyable. I appreciated your knowledge of coming up with great thoughts. I bert you put a lot of effort into this draft. You have my mind flowing on your paper which makes me understand myself even more.

You came up with following up questions which are a great way to start your paper. You explain how often time people get distracted by something else and try to forget about it but it is hard to control your mind. You have to fight your mind in certain ways just to focus on yourself. I totally agree how you stated that "people's abilities are limited." It seem like your mind is control by another person and wanted you to do something, but really we dont want to do what our "mind" sometimes tell us to do. For instance, "daydreaming" is a way of gettin distracted even though you dont realize you are doing it. Or say that you failed the same test a lot of time and you think about suiciding but seriously who wants to die. I dont think we're free at some points, such as obeying the laws or your parents. Keeping your thoughts and feeling inside of you doesnt show you that you are free.

Bao Lin, your paper is amazing... i cant even argue with you. I feel the same way as you..."I rather just be myself and accept the fact that i will never be free..." It is like sometimes we just have to keep on walking at the same old path and cant accept the fact the society is making us suffer. Thanks a lot for sharing your essay and i enjoy it. Good thoughts and development.

To Lieb Y,

Hey Lieb, awesome paper you have written. You are such a strong writer. Your paper is amazing and thoughtful. I bet you put a lot of effort into this draft. It is clear and you have broken down your major points, to make it easy for [us] to understand. Your paper almost sound like Bao Lin, talking about freedom.

I like how you started out with a couple of questions and then explain why you feel this way. You explain how we the people has the right to make our own decisions and free to become whoever we want, but theres a limited to our freedom. Good quotes you pointed out from Banarch.

Aww man Lieb, your paper really got me thinking and feeling nervous. I want to live a better life and i really want to feel exactly the meaning of the word "happiness" I enjoy your paper but you got me thinking when i dont want to think [right now] You support your paper with many great quotes and thank you for sharing your idea. You really got me thinking about what will my life be like in the next 5 years?