Tuesday, September 22, 2009

HW # 2 : Blog Comments 1

To Mahogany,

Hey Mahogany, awesome paper you have written. You are such a strong writer. Your paper is amazing and thoughtful. You put a lot of effort into this paper, didnt you? It was clear and you even breakdown your major points to make it easy for us to understand.

You explain how absolute individual is one who use their own mind and logic to get through life without anyone. There is truely no one in the world can understand how we feel inside. We think and feel differently, like what you mention about guns. Gun to you equals fear but to the majority of people they think gun are fun and it is for protection. You came up with a good point of how people feel so alone inside of them and just cant let it out. I love your statement... " The thought of being alone in the world is not to smoothing. It rates almost the same emotions as being the last living person in the world." I totally agree with you.

Mahogany, I dont know what to say, your paper is fantastic. We have the same thoughts of being left alone. It is like we are trapped into this dark place and couldnt find the way out. This also leads me to a horrible feeling that my "girlfriend" doesnt really know who i am. It is like when we get into a fight, she doesnt realize what i am thinking and feeling.

Thanks for updating this wonderful essay about the "island of subjectivitly" You are the best =D I wish Mr. Manley assign me as your group member so i can keep on reading your interesting essay.

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